Tell me what you think, please! It's not finished yet, so more will be coming soon.~~The Cold God~~March 14~~
- When I review this, do you want me to suggest revisions or just keep it comprehensive like EightyOne's review of my story? Screennameless - "Goodnight, everybody!" 19:53, 19 March 2009 (UTC)
Whatever you think it needs :) ~~The Cold God--19 March 2009~~